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I drank the sky
with a desperate sound
rising from my throat.

Not even the clouds
could stop this
raging thirst,
a violent longing.

I sipped the stars
like cheap tea
and I dreamed
and dreamed
and dreamed.
Another poem. I like this one a lot. Especially the last stanza.
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Chariline Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
I still definitely like this and I think I like it more with each rereading. c: I especially like how it feels as though it's alluding to something more than what is being let on in the poem, but of course that feeling could be me, being an English major in-training, and reading far too much into this. xD In any case, it's absolutely lovely! <3
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mwezii Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
rgrewgwerg Thank. I am personally really fond of this one. Got a lot of positive feedback. :3
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A thirst for dreams that are endless or an endless thirst for dreams. A great idea.
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mwezii Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! <3
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hcafantastic Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
I like it a lot too. Also especially the last stanza. Really nice work.
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mwezii Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I appreciate the feedback! :3
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killingspiders Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good god, can I put this in my altered book? With credit to you, of course. c:
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mwezii Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
With credit, sure! :3
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killingspiders Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have no idea how to give you credit. Do I...write your username?
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mwezii Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'Cassidy Simpson' works haha. Not scared of my real name!
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